Using
the poem “A Storm is Coming Up” to assist students in understanding
bad
weather such as Hurricane Katrina
The first rule in teaching poetry to young
children is read it aloud daily, first the teacher, then the kids. Have
them learn favorites and share those favorites with the class. Make poetry
an integral part of the curriculum. Integrate it into other topics. Studying
weather because of Hurricane Katrina? Read Sandburg's "Fog" or Frost's
poem about the crow shaking down the dust of snow.
The Macaroon Moon contains several
poems that are about weather conditions. Wanda Haan’s “Fog” on page 17
and “Mountain Laurel”
on pages 22 and 23 are two of them. But the
most appropriate poem to use in discussing a hurricane or tornado is “A
Storm is Coming
Up” on pages 4 and 5. The cut paper art by
artist Donald Christensen for “A Storm is Coming Up” is shown with this
article.
Reading
and Discussing “A Storm is Coming Up”
Young children are capable of literary criticism,
if only at a very simple level. It is more important to recognize the valuable
skill-building
nature of such reflection and discussion.
Using focusing questions to encourage discussion
among young students helps them to hear the poems clearly and refine their
skills
to listen for and respond to the poem’s message
and emotion.
Ask the following questions when discussing
“A Storm is Coming Up” in The Macaroon Moon:
1. How did the poem make you feel?
2. Did the poem make you see weather in a
different way? How?
3. Tell me a part of the poem that you liked/disliked
and why.
4. Which words helped you to see pictures
in your mind?
5. Did any part of the poem surprise you?
6. Did the poem “A Storm Coming Up” help
you to remember similar experiences from your life?
If there are children in your class that experienced
Hurricane Katrina personally, or the children have relatives or friends
that experienced
the storm, you may wish to omit question
6 above. It would be better for children to volunteer information about
experiences than to put
them on the spot because their experiences
may be very sad, or to them, embarrassing.
The
First Reading
After the first reading of the poem, the
teacher can select one or two important teaching points that extend the
children’s learning to a higher level. These points may be based on the
teacher’s careful observations of children’s processing behaviors during
reading. The teacher should use the opportunity to praise and prompt terms
children used or neglected using to discuss during the first reading.
1. Initiate a problem-solving activity. For
example, on the unfamiliar usage of the word ‘blink’ in the line,
“A blink of lightning,” ask students
why they think Wanda Haan used that word.
Or ask what the poet meant when she wrote “My ears are full….” How can
ears be full of
anything except earwax?
2. Show awareness of errors while students
are reading the poem out loud. If a student mispronounces a word, it may
interfere with his or
her understanding of the stanza.
3. Use known words or parts of words to solve
unknown words. ‘Scarier’ in “Scarier weather you cannot buy” will probably
be difficult to pronounce. But if not pronounced correctly, the student
may not understand what is meant. And of course this line may bring up
the question as to whether you can buy good or bad weather.
After
the First Reading
Ask the students to go back to “A Storm is
Coming” and to whisper-read the poem to themselves. Remind them to keep
rereading the poem until you are ready to call the group’s attention again.
As children begin to read the poem independently, monitor each child by
listening for a few moments and observing his or her reading behaviors.
Interruption of the reading should be kept to a minimum. Intervene only
when a child might lose the meaning of the text or seem unable to read
the poetry. Give prompts as needed when a child comes to a challenge that
he or she is unable to overcome.
Relating
student emotions created by Hurricane Katrina to “A Storm is Coming
Up”
Depending on what area of the country your
class is located, this may be the most sensitive part of using this poem
or any poem or prose
to assist students to relate to the disaster.
If it’s possible children in your class were housed, for example, in the
New Orleans Convention Center as part of the 25,000 people who sought refuge
there during the flooding, you as the teacher do not know what deprivations
and emotions the children may have personally experienced. Hunger, thirst,
anger and fear are possible. Being a witness to or being on the receiving
end of violence is possible. A child who has gone through such an ordeal
may have something to teach adults. The most
disturbing result of their ordeal may be
life long insecurities about their safety and the availability of reliable
nourishment.
The insecurities caused by Hurricane Katrina
can have lasting consequences for children. Towards the end of “A Storm
is Coming Up,”
Wanda Haan wrote the lines,
“I hope a rainbow
Comes at the end.”
Let
children know that the future may hold a rainbow or many rainbows. Discuss
possible positive experiences and consequences of Hurricane Katrina for
their future. Explore children’s personal understandings. Reassure them
that things will be better.
Many things are being discussed now as a
result of the hurricane. Better systems of containing water in those parts
of the country below
sea level, for example. Stronger building
codes for houses, schools, stores and offices in those parts of the nation
subjected to hurricanes and tornadoes. Better stockpiling and easier access
of food and water for emergency use. Faster responses by civilian and military
authorities to natural disasters. These would all be rainbows for people
caught in future natural disasters. Discuss what children know about these
subjects and ask if they have any suggestions to contribute to this rainbow
of future safety for everyone.